Ancillaries- Draft 7 (Final)

Final Draft
Ancillaries

Self Assessment: 

For our final draft of our ancillaries we gave our selves:
Newspaper Advert: 10/10
Double Page Spread: 9/10
This was because one of the actors could have had her hair down.

Teacher Assessment:

After Miss Connell assessed out ancillaries she gave us: 

Newspaper Advert:  9/10
Double Page Spread: 10/10 

This is because she said it would be better if the people in the advert were dressed in a less distractive clothes.

Peer Assesssment: 

After we showed the advert to some people they said:

Newspaper Advert:  10/10
Double Page Spread: 10/10
They said that they could not find any errors and the ancillaries were just like an channel 4 one. They said it was perfect!!!