Ancillaries
Self Assessment:
For our final draft of our ancillaries we gave our selves:Newspaper Advert: 10/10
Double Page Spread: 9/10
This was because one of the actors could have had her hair down.
Teacher Assessment:
After Miss Connell assessed out ancillaries she gave us:
Newspaper Advert: 9/10
Double Page Spread: 10/10
This is because she said it would be better if the people in the advert were dressed in a less distractive clothes.Double Page Spread: 10/10
Peer Assesssment:
After we showed the advert to some people they said:Newspaper Advert: 10/10
Double Page Spread: 10/10
They said that they could not find any errors and the ancillaries were just like an channel 4 one. They said it was perfect!!!

No comments:
Post a Comment